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A twig


A twig grows straight and slim
by a gurgling mountain brook
dreaming of the day he knew must come
when he’d be the tallest tree on the hill.
But erosion brings down an old tree
which falls dead centre on the twig,
bending it to ninety degrees, perhaps more:
but does it stop growing?
Does it wait for someone, some god,
to come along and move the offending tree?
It keeps growing, though bent and odd ;
nor does it care, for its search
is ever to the light in each new day..

An old fallen tree; a belief system:
one and the same, and many are those
who cannot go beyond this boundary.
They stop; they think that’s all there is;
the last question, the last answer.

Look to that twig!  How does it know
to hunger for light in the darkness?
Life does have its strange burdens
but it graces us with some amazing gifts:
the power to change; to adapt:
to forgive all and to move on.
Nefarious_Tool
Thats a great concept.  I like the line about seeing the light in each new day.  I always related plants to growing toward the light, but that is a refreshing look.  The fact that the light does go away, and to a tree, the light coming back is to us a new day.  Very nice.
Lord Pineapple
Nice poem, reminded me of the joke about two acorns and the old oak tree!
SavyAngel
Powerful story about life hun. Live life no matter what is thrown in your way or tries to block your path, and be proud of who you are. Good job personifying the tree. I liked this a lot. This is going in the book.
RocPilot
Vivid. ~PEACE~
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