Written on 30/07/02

It seem's we've grown apart,
I can't explain,
I thought we were the perfect match,
Perhaps it's time for me to go,
To a place less forbidden than this,
My mind trembles at your thoughts,
Whether you want me or not,
Maybe it just wasn't right.
My heart's bruised in distance,
Can't see that we were never meant to be,
My emotions just keep on the same beat,
There's a life out there for us,
Even if we never make it,
I know I'll always have my memories of you.
You're out of reach,
Perhaps I should give up,
Cry out loud and take the next breathe,
I could see it on your face,
I could feel it in your eyes,
I could taste it on your lips,
But every day you seem to change and I wonder,
Was I ever loved by you?

wow. ma this hit hard. great relay of emotions, i felt it. i like it alot.
You're out of reach,
Perhaps I should give up,
Cry out loud and take the next breathe,
I could see it on your face,
I could feel it in your eyes,
I could taste it on your lips,
But every day you seem to change and I wonder,
Was I ever loved by you?
this really bhut the power in it.

man i am sure everyone has felt this way and it is such a great expession of this very feeling great job!

Great emotion, I enjoyed your poem a lot :)

A bruised heart in the distance.. Aww..

:( So sad.. So powerful and vivid..



Just has so much meaning to it.. **looks throug the emodicons to find a pair of sad-looking eyes.. Seems to have these when she reads your stuff** :( is prolly the saddest eyes I could find.. too..

I loved the way that the title was amongst the poem. Bravo.

Awww.... can I kill the gurl who did this to you, and you can kill the guy who did this similar situation to me???

We can have them wacked Adam... heh. JUst a thought... I like this. Keep writing.

Lizz

Hmmm... Lizz's whacking plot aside, this is a very expressive poem Adam. And while everyone has quoted the ending (which was awesome, to be sure), I also liked this Since this poem is from a while back, I hope the emotion of the situation has changed.

Bryan

OF ALL I HAVE READ WRITTEN BY YOU ...
THIS ONE IS MY FAVORITE...VERY CLOSE TO MY FEELINGS TODAY
THANKS FOR SHARING ADAM.

~NINN

It's nice. Remind me to read your section more.