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Blind Lover

Jul 27 2002, 04:05 AM

Why do you look at me as thou you love me?
Why do you touch as if you cared?
I see what you are doing
And yet I still let it happen
I know one day you will get tired of me
("Your Toy")
One day you will drop me as thou we had nothing
All those nights of passion
All those times of tender kisses
Wasted
Wasted on a love that was never there
I have given you the best of me
You took it greedily
Yet I still give
Knowing its going to end
Knowing one day you will leave
And I will once again be alone

Night Watcher

Jul 27 2002, 04:10 AM

this is great sweetie...i kow how you feel...love ya...tr

theargument

Jul 27 2002, 04:13 AM

That is so depressing.

janny8675309

Jul 27 2002, 04:24 AM

i like it.,... you know that...

Blind Lover

Jul 27 2002, 04:27 AM

Thanks guys so much.

Sleepyhunneh

Jul 27 2002, 04:44 AM

*sighs dreamily* i love it...really..ive been there..am there...

Dreary Am I

Jul 27 2002, 04:58 AM

That was amazing. I like this poem a lot.

Y_not

Jul 27 2002, 05:02 AM

passionate emtional.

Blind Lover

Jul 27 2002, 08:01 PM

Thank you very much.....*bows*, I am very glad that ya'll enjoyed it.

Aradia669

Jul 28 2002, 09:34 PM

QUOTE(Blind Lover @ Jul 27 2002, 05:05 AM)

I know one day you will get tired of me
("Your Toy")
One day you will drop me as thou we had nothing
All those nights of passion
All those times of tender kisses
Wasted
Wasted on a love that was never there
I have given you the best of me

This is my favorite part...I've been there hun. I know its not fun but it happens and we continue living...great poem.

~*Alexandria*~

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