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SergoD



A labyrinth.
It eats me.
I don't care.
I rove.
Noah
QUOTE (SergoD @ Dec 31 2010, 05:50 AM) *
A labyrinth.
It eats me.
I don't care.
I rove.

the narrator is fearlessly
wandering through the maze
that houses the man-eating
bull-headed monister

a powerful metaphor!
SergoD
Thank you!
Today I'll avoid to look at my reflection in the mirror!
Thanks, Noah!
Sergo.
Noah
QUOTE (SergoD @ Jan 3 2011, 06:00 AM) *
Today I'll avoid to look at my reflection in the mirror!

ha ha, your comment adds a further twist to your poem - clever!
Anirbas
*CLAP! CLAP! CLAP! CLAP! CLAP!*

Absolutely fabulous epigram, Serg!

Just slipped by to say *Happy Birthday* to a dear, old friend and was gifted
myself with the reading of this lovely poem!

Best wishes!
Davidf
Sergo,
Why do I feel the sudden urge to play Pac-Man after reading this poem? Lol. (Hope you get my sense of humor here). Good write.
~Davidf
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