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Sleepyhunneh
My Dream Came Ture
By Laura Dunstan
Theme - Sad

every nite
i find myself in the same place
contemplating the same dream
hoping for a miracle.
and every time
i think i've got a hold on this
but easily i let go
easily, everything slips.

and i remind myself
that someday things will change
my heart can't mean
to be his way

coz in his eyes i kno that i'll find me
in his breaths i kno i'll find the strength to breathe
in his arms i kno i'll find serenity, but
until that day comes
i'll wait for my dream.

carefully i've
stepped on every stone
and the path i've known
has chosen to confuse me.
now, though alone
i see where i stand
i realize my demands
are more than i'm accepting.

so now i pray to God
the road won't always change
my heart can't mean
to be his way

coz in his eyes i kno that i'll find me
in his breaths i kno i'll find the strength to breathe
in his arms i kno i'll find serenity, but
until that day comes
i'll wait for my dream.

give me patience
give me good graces
please, help me
to achieve...

save my wishes
no matter if one switches
he will always be
my dream

when his eyes will finally reveal me
when his breathing revives my soul and heals me
when his arms protect me from all but the truth
that's when i'll know
my dream came true
Aradia669
Well, I really like it...so I wanted to at least say that for now. I'll reply back later to tell ya all the parts that I liked when I have more time.




~*Alexandria*~
SavyAngel
For the book. I think this is the best I've read by you so far. Yes, it does need a little work, but it's pretty damn good.
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