Blushing maidens
Unto their glass windows dance
And before them viewing
Radient dreams

Such fair things
Do glow eternally
But theirs shall fade
To false desires

I like this. It's kinda quirky in a way, but I think it really works to your advantage. Great job here.

The idea behind this piece was inspired by a song, but when I wrote it I thought of it as more sexual in nature. That these innocent girls are dreaming of things (like knights and palaces) that girls before and after them will dream of, but do to the essence of people growing, their understanding of the world will change and those innocent thoughts will get lost in possibly erotic future. It's difficult to keep your innocence. . .

Bella

I like the way you've mixed reality with fantasy here. It's a good poem. Well done :)

To the poetry book with you!

This is so short but so truthful. I honestly cannot say that much about it except that I liked this one a lot. Plus, I love your avatar. *grins* Good job sweetie!