spun like a stool
a sign of the times
when grease-spattered hair
fell like the falls on the boys
and the bees were swarming
to the coif's of the girls
'round and 'round to Chubby
and his "Twist"
and you were the kind of guy
that "liked to roam around" like Dion
or a "Candy Girl" so dubbed by Frankie
spun like a stool
with a stack of forty-fives
and "High-Fidelity" on either side
of the deepest cleavage known to man
just sitting on that spinning stool
hot
in the blue of the flame

I like this, perhaps just some work on grammer.

HI,
I must agree with Adam on this. It is a rather good piece-yet needs a few touch-ups.Don't give up.