punk_rocker6473
May 26 2002, 03:03 AM
Better to love and lose
then to not have loved at all
Who is to ask this question
Do they even know
What it feels like
To grow to love
and lose
I would rather
have not loved
Then
at least
It wouldn't feel like
my insides
are being torn out
and my mind
is screaming at me
Do not tell me
to not have loved
is the real loss
The real loss
is too desire
NEVER TO LOVE AGAIN
Prisoner_to_Sadness
May 30 2002, 02:08 PM
oh wow. i can not explain how much this poem relates to me and how it says it so well. my last relationship was amazing and it was true love. then one day he just broke up with me and never gave a reason why. we were together a friggin year. that hurt really bad. this poem is so amazing it almost puts me to tears. i have no desire to get involved or love anyone else. for right now i have been left to turn bitter and stay single for the REST of my life. it may not be like that my whole life but for now it is. i am soo so glad you wrote this. THANKYOU. awesome poem please keep writing stuff like that.
Y_not
May 30 2002, 04:45 PM
thats the majic of this place
by the way i like this piece too, felt the emotion!
good shit
DreamingInSilence
May 30 2002, 07:02 PM
*applauds* wonderful job sweetie.
darksoul
Jun 23 2002, 05:28 AM
(this is punk_rocker6473 in my new screen name)
i look back at my older work and realize that my feelings sadly have not changed but maybe they will.
Nyxie
Jun 24 2002, 01:26 PM
very... intense. Love it!
darksoul
Jun 25 2002, 02:18 AM
thanks a bunch you guys!
DraigenWolf
Jun 25 2002, 02:42 AM
Congratulations i feel this poem is well worth the recognition of being published if/when we get that far.
Night Watcher
Jun 27 2002, 06:03 AM
i love it!! it is very good...and i hate when those word leave the mouth of some one who has never felt the pain when you lose love......i hate the saying to b/c my x said those words to me "it is better to have loved and lost then to never had loved at all" ....i didnt go anywhere. i dont know...but i love it! great job!
StarGazer
Jun 28 2002, 02:58 AM
This was great. I really liked it a lot.
RocPilot
Jul 4 2002, 11:20 PM
powerful. Nice work. ~PEACE~
SailorStar16
Jul 12 2002, 06:40 AM
Heather,
I keep saying that you are so gifted cause you are!! You know how to write, this is what you should do for a living!!! B)
Phoenix
Jul 13 2002, 12:59 AM
Wow. I love this poem....it's so packed with emotion, but with so few words. It's absolutely fantastic! You write brilliantly...keep up the good work!
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