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Judgment
I could tear out my being from this world,
An' how many would notice?
I could lay my life on a scale,
An' what would I have to show for it?
I don't have much but a mental state,
That is far from being perfect.
But I strive for what you would not understand,
An' everything below the surface.
I tear away the shell of man,
An' strip away his pride.
For what you have hidden beneath,
Are years of welcomed lies.
For I will pound an' pound, an' show,
The weakness in your soul.
That will match the rhythm of my beating,
Of the pain in which I know.
For I will rise and rise an' flow,
Like the ebbing of my soul.
And bring forth secrets well hidden,
That I have yet to show.
For I have stumbled along this,
This path darkened by time.
An' there is no more wishing,
That I could rewind.
There is too much happening,
This hammering in my head.
An' I can not get this out of me,
The screaming of the dead.
Show me no more what I can’t contain,
This beating, beating at my brain.
An' slow the anger that is taking over,
An' driving me insane.
For I am your judgment,
Fate has made me so.
And I will watch you suffer,
As you claw at your hole.
An' I will be there to bury you,
Not a smile shall I wear.
For I am not wanting to do this,
You chose for me to put you there.
Lyra
as i've said in a reply to another of yours, your work is so pleasing to hear read aloud. your rhythm is flawless and your choice of words is perfect for the mood.
i'll be looking forward to more of your work.
Judgment
Thank you for your comments Lyra, you brightened my day.
Adam
Such such a good piece. So strong.
Duende
Can almost feel every blow through the rhythms.
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