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Menefirithion
Any PQers or BMRers have probably already read this, but oh well.

     Welcomes

"Welcome to the wedding," the greeter says,
Yet it is no welcome for the stranger.
He walks down the aisle to the section labeled
"Miscellaneous Friends."
He sits, head in hands, holding back his tears,
Wondering why he came.

The wedding music comes to pass,
And as she walks down the aisle,
The stranger breaks down.
He cannot help it, his life seems hollow
Save all the mistakes he has made.
He's red with sorry and rage
Even though he knows he shouldn't be.

"Speak now, or forever hold your peace,"
He sits on the pew, knowing he can't stand.
He has so much to say,
But he knows it will do no good.
So he sits, alone, forever alone,
Until his dying day.

He rememebers when his life was good,
When his troubles were so few.
He knew in his heart it'd not alway be
He knew, he knew, he knew.

Yet he convinced himself life would stay great,
That he was perfect, and he'd succeed.
Slowly, though, he realized that "rock bottom"
Does not exist. He sits there, helpless,
Falling deeper and deeper,
As his life rots away.

The wedding done, he leaves the chapel
Worse off then he'd been.
His fate is sealed, she'll never be his,
Yet he can't stop loving her.
He knows he never will.
And that's what kills him the most.
dk7987
I really liked this poem. It's filled with that "other side of love" that everyone knows and can relate too. And i love the way it was written, how most of it was free verse, yet a good rhyme here and there. so few people can write in free verse and still make it seem like a poem, and not them just talking. great job. why, when ever an author chooses to write a refelection on his/her life, they allways pick a sad moment to reflect? just thoughts in my head. nice job.
                                           DK
Menefirithion
an answer to your question: There are a lot more sad moments in life, and they are much easier to remember and write about than happy moments. At least for me, that is.
rainrose
I couldn't give you a ratio of my happy or sad moments, but I know that the sad is much easier to write about.  


nice, nice, I already told you what I think of this.  (great last stanza btw)
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