Title: Lost In Fantasy
genre: fantasy
date written: august 22nd
name:[l3lackN0tes]


Reality is but a speck of light
Upon this black undisturbed sky
Which holds no eyes upon our heads
And shows no mercy upon my life

There comes no light in my fantasy
Eternal black is the road ahead
From the Great Goddess in the sky
Comes crimson drops of dread

My fleck of hope has disappeared
A wall of lies has rapt me
from this world i will never escape
Forever lost in fantasy

Very nice read. I don't come in here often. Well, no, I never come in here, but this is a good read and fantastical too. I think the the last three lines were a bit to quick though, quicker than the rest of the poem, but it doesn't matter cause it was nice to read this. Keep them coming.

thanks dude, i'll see about the last three lines too

:)

Beautiful writing, the kind that feels better in a more suited environment. Congrats; into the book it goes.

Wow, barely away from the newbie title and already in the book!

only one word
Great

lol amanda, i was thinking the same thing too!
thanks trueEvil

Newbie and in the book that is awesome! Though it is a good read right here and is beautiful. Great peace of work right here. Keep up the good writting.