And with this
We end

We end not knowing
Who we are
Or why we are here

And on this . . .
Our final day,
And our final chance
To say
I love you

We part ways

In silence


Sheena Call

Sad

This is really beautiful. So simple but yet it shows so much. I like the way you broke the lines, it made it interesting to read and it gave this piece a certain rhythm. I can really relate to this. The only thing I suggest to change is in the poem tell/show that the words "Es fapusa Hcnda" mean I love you. Anyway, great poem. Keep posting! ~falcon

This really hit home, wow.... What a way to describe what happened....
I don't quite know what else to say; I'm speechless.

Cam

Very wonderful... deep... meaningful.... it says what it means cut and dry.... to the point End Of Da Story!

Hahahah Very very good Sheena.... PS this is April we met the other night on Voice on YIM hahahah

Later
April

Thanks guys! Glad you all enjoyed it!

Cam, you are a nutball. I have never really known you to be speechless. And this was really the only way to describe it, cause its really pretty much exactly how it happened.

April, you are a nutball too! And I knew it was you cause last night me and Chelle were talking about what I should name the doggie I might be getting, and I said Rayne, and she said "that's April's raver name!" So I kinda put two and nine together. hehe!

Thanks again guys!

This is by far the best one I have read from you...

I loved the made up language.

Chavez

This is awsome. You have a great poem here and the made up language speaks volumes for itself. Keep up the great writing, Sheena.