Title: obsession
Theme: a passionate desire
Date Written:close to when it was posted
Author: Robert S. (hanginout)


When stars shine from heaven
And refect the love in your eyes
I want to be the Universe

Raindrops that touch your skin
Wind that sweeps through your hair
Sunshine that warms your cheeks

I want to be the song
in your every breath

I have to say, you've quickly made an impression on me of what a deep, thoughtful writer you are. This is going to the Showcase.

Bryan

Thank You Bryan. I feel like a needle in a haystack of talent...but I am hooked on this site. Mainly for reading, but I thought I should post something before FormulaP freaks out on me.

This is beautiful. I'm just sorry I didn't get to it sooner. Very good move, Bryan. What a bang, kid, what a bang. Excellent. (yes I run out of words quickly heh)

LOL....I wasn't even close to freaking out :-))) but it is about time! :-))
To feel so deeply......sigh
Nice...Very Nice!!!!!

Such a moving poem deserves a spot in the Drytear Book. So that's where it's going. Congratulations Bob (now get back here and write some more :D ).

Bryan

Such a moving poem deserves a spot in the Drytear Book. So that's where it's going. Congratulations Bob (now get back here and write some more :D ).

Bryan